Stencil and pen

The challenge at Paper Pretties is to try a new technique.  I have procrastinated, trying to think of something.  I decided to try a stencil - since I keep forgetting to look for embossing paste, I had hoped I could improvise.  My first couple of tries were not a success!  (I tried Versamark and chalk.)  So I resorted to a pen - still not satisfied, but it will have to do for now.  (How is this new?  These stencils  have been sitting in my drawer for years...I used them a couple of times - embossing with a tool.  I also previously tried using them on the Cuttlebug but I need more work on that as well!0
I also tried dry embossing two layers - the pale teal and the DP - a technique I have used a time or two in the past.
Can you tell I am not really pleased with the result - any suggestions would be appreciated!
Sketch from 2-04, with monochromatic tones:  http://sweetsketchwednesday2.blogspot.com/
New technique:  http://paperprettiesblog.blogspot.com/
Spooled item:  http://thesquirrelandthefox.blogspot.com/
Not a square:  http://qkrstampede.blogspot.co.uk/
Spring colors:  http://allsortschallenge.blogspot.com/
Any:  http://craftycatzweeklychallenge.blogspot.com/
         http://4kraftygirlzchallenges.blogspot.co.uk/